Proposed fix of Guzey’s misquoting Walker re sleep deprivation

Nov 01, 2024 · By Dennis Hackethal · Forked from Guzey misquotes Walker re sleep deprivation · Fork · Check another quote

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Approximately 30 to 40 percent of these patients will feel better after a night without sleep. Their lack of slumber appears to be an antidepressant. The reason sleep deprivation is not a commonly used treatment, however, is twofold. First, as soon as these individuals do sleep, the antidepressant benefit goes away. Second, the 60 to 70 percent of patients who do not respond to the sleep deprivation will actually feel worse, deepening their depression. As a result, sleep deprivation is not a realistic or comprehensive therapy option.
Walker, Matthew. Why We Sleep: Unlocking the Power of Sleep and Dreams. Chapter 7. Scribner 2017: New York. Scribd Edition.

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Approximately 30 to 40 percent of these patients will feel better after a night without sleep. … [T]he 60 to 70 percent of patients who do not respond to the sleep deprivation will actually feel worse, deepening their depression. As a result, sleep deprivation is not a realistic or comprehensive therapy option.
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✓ No issues found using regular expression . and Histogram algorithm. 
Approximately‧30‧to‧40‧percent‧of‧these‧patients‧will‧feel‧*better*‧after‧a‧night‧without‧sleep.‧Their‧lack‧of‧slumber‧appears‧to‧be‧an‧antidepressant.…↵
The‧reason‧sleep‧deprivation‧is‧not‧a‧commonly‧used‧treatment,‧however,‧is‧twofold.‧First,‧as‧soon‧as‧these‧individuals‧do‧sleep,‧the‧antidepressant‧benefit‧goes‧away.‧Second,‧t[T]he‧60‧to‧70‧percent‧of‧patients‧who‧do‧not‧respond‧to‧the‧sleep‧deprivation‧will‧actually‧feel‧worse,‧deepening‧their‧depression.‧As‧a‧result,‧sleep‧deprivation‧is‧not‧a‧realistic‧or‧comprehensive‧therapy‧option.

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Approximately‧30‧to‧40‧percent‧of‧these‧patients‧will‧feel‧*better*‧after‧a‧night‧without‧sleep.‧
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Their‧lack‧of‧slumber‧appears‧to‧be‧an‧antidepressant.
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…
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The‧reason‧sleep‧deprivation‧is‧not‧a‧commonly‧used‧treatment,‧however,‧is‧twofold.‧First,‧as‧soon‧as‧these‧individuals‧do‧sleep,‧the‧antidepressant‧benefit‧goes‧away.‧Second,‧t
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[T]
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he‧60‧to‧70‧percent‧of‧patients‧who‧do‧not‧respond‧to‧the‧sleep‧deprivation‧will‧actually‧feel‧worse,‧deepening‧their‧depression.‧As‧a‧result,‧sleep‧deprivation‧is‧not‧a‧realistic‧or‧comprehensive‧therapy‧option.

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