i/o misquotes SF Chronicle

Jul 11, 2024 · By Dennis Hackethal · Fork · Check another quote

Original text

Statistics published by the police department showed year-to-year crime had dropped by 33% overall by the end of April, a dramatic shift after last year’s spike. Mayor Sheng Thao praised the city for turning a corner. Gov. Gavin Newsom quoted the 33% figure in a news release touting Oakland’s partnership with the California Highway Patrol. The news spread through social media posts and optimistic headlines, including stories in the Chronicle. But a new Chronicle review of Oakland police data finds that the city overstated the improvements actually seen on the streets.
https://www.sfchronicle.com/crime/article/oakland-police-data-reports-19545681.php

Quote text

Statistics published by the [Oakland] police department showed year-to-year crime had dropped by 33% overall... But a new Chronicle review of Oakland police data found that the city overstated the improvements...
https://x.com/eyeslasho/status/1811222173886877981
Ellipsis used (if any): ‘...’
Found 3 issue(s) using regular expression \w+ and Myers algorithm, underlined in wavy red. 
Statistics‧published‧by‧the‧[Oakland]‧police‧department‧showed‧year-to-year‧crime‧had‧dropped‧by‧33%‧overall...‧by‧the‧end‧of‧April,‧a‧dramatic‧shift‧after‧last‧year’s‧spike.‧Mayor‧Sheng‧Thao‧praised‧the‧city‧for‧turning‧a‧corner.‧Gov.‧Gavin‧Newsom‧quoted‧the‧33%‧figure‧in‧a‧news‧release‧touting‧Oakland’s‧partnership‧with‧the‧California‧Highway‧Patrol.‧The‧news‧spread‧through‧social‧media‧posts‧and‧optimistic‧headlines,‧including‧stories‧in‧the‧Chronicle.↵
But‧a‧new‧Chronicle‧review‧of‧Oakland‧police‧data‧findsfound‧that‧the‧city‧overstated‧the‧improvements‧actually‧seen‧on‧the‧streets....

Explanation

# Part Valid? Explanation
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Statistics‧published‧by‧the‧
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[Oakland]‧
 ✓ yes Insertion is properly bracketed.
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police‧department‧showed‧year-to-year‧crime‧had‧dropped‧by‧33%‧overall
4 
...
 ✓ yes Insertion is an ellipsis.
5 
‧
6 
by‧the‧end‧of‧April,‧a‧dramatic‧shift‧after‧last‧year’s‧spike.‧Mayor‧Sheng‧Thao‧praised‧the‧city‧for‧turning‧a‧corner.‧Gov.‧Gavin‧Newsom‧quoted‧the‧33%‧figure‧in‧a‧news‧release‧touting‧Oakland’s‧partnership‧with‧the‧California‧Highway‧Patrol.‧The‧news‧spread‧through‧social‧media‧posts‧and‧optimistic‧headlines,‧including‧stories‧in‧the‧Chronicle.↵
 × no Deletions cannot contain linebreaks.
7 
But‧a‧new‧Chronicle‧review‧of‧Oakland‧police‧data‧
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finds
 × no Deletions must be indicated, eg by ‘...’ or [replacement].
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found
 × no Insertions must be surrounded by [brackets].
10 
‧that‧the‧city‧overstated‧the‧improvements
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‧actually‧seen‧on‧the‧streets.
 ✓ yes Deletion is followed by a valid insertion.
12 
...
 ✓ yes Insertion is an ellipsis.

Notes

Update: i/o has since followed up saying they quoted an archived version of the SF Chronicle article. But they haven’t provided the archived source.

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